Day15 MAr-27

The Feedback was given after I submitted the first draft, they said they did not understand why the first section of the article is black and white. And the watch section is too plain, and I was suggested to separate the sections according to the article as well.

After the feedback I received, I begin to improve the design, I removed all the top assets and changed the background to white, found some vibrant-looking assets, then sectioned the article into 3. The intro, Kate, and the Watch.

now I can start to decorate the article, by researching some themes I’ve found my way to the Theme “Bokeh”, the camera effect when you unfocus the background cause the light source to become multiple round blobs in the background. And I decided to decorate the article with this theme.

As in the middle of the article I used warm color (orangeish) so I decided to source the Bokeh effect in that color palate. As the article mentions Kate’s Lune Croissanterie, therefore I chose the bread color to correlate with it and had it as the main color theme.

When I work my way to the watch section, I realize I could use the circle shape to manage the awkwardly cropped large asset, as it fits the ‘Bokeh’ them.

At the End of the day, I submitted the final design.

hrs: 8 hours

Total hours: 120hrs

Link to drive: Work